This piece was tedious and repetitive. I did not like it.

Wow, that's creepy, gave me goosebumps. Hope that never happens to anyone.

Excellent. It had this definite Alfred Hitchcock vibe to it. I love the style of writing. Great work!

Also, thank you for your review! ^_^

Elegant and creepy. I like it.

The simplicity of the language and the mantra "he watched her" make this story go bang. It's dark and raw, good.

By its self, though, it doesn't seem complete. Perhaps you could expand, tell us more about the characters - the woman in particular, so we (the readers) will feel more when he kills her.

Wow that is so creepy! but thank you for reviewing my work. Keep up the good writing.

It creeped me out.

Great job. :)

It was ok but the it would have been better if you had put a little more detail into the death scene...instead of choking her how about raping her, skinning her alive and then locking her into her house and setting it on fire. Just an example...not that i've had practice...hehehe...~Looks around cautiously~

Well, that was short but, wow. Really that was amazingly developed and carried out. The freaky aura that you managed to keep through the story made it even more enthralling. Keep up the great work.

omg...the title drew me in...but omg...thats terrible what happened in your story...but wow it happened just like that...and you can almost see everything happening...but slowly...wowsomething i wondered after reading the poem was "why?" but...i dunno lol dat was good...

That is really creepy. I love the repetition with the "He watched her." Good fic.