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| Kaay-chan 2005-07-25 ch 1,   | Wow, this was so deep. I really loved it. keep up the good work. |
| Kara-Scura-Coryza 2005-07-24 ch 1, | Always love your work Holo-Sama |
| Aspirinforyourheadache 2005-07-24 ch 1, | Ah, time. It can be such a fleeting thing when you're treated to wonderful treasures, or it can be an element that could go on and on in instances of torture. Respectively, for the cases above, you'd want it to continue, or you'd want it to end. Glad you wrote about this, cause I've had moments where I just need to ponder upon this thing: Time. What does it mean for me? What am I to do with the little of it that I have? O.O...I'm just rambling, sorry. I really did like this. It had a realistic edge to it, and I found that quite moving. Everyone's affected by time, and the simplicity here really drove home aspects of it that matter in major ways. Lovely poem, holo! |
| Clubbed-Raven 2005-07-24 ch 1, | Feel kind of sad now you have somehow pointed out the ugly truth about time. All and all a very nice piece. |