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ozu no mahotsukai 2005-10-02 . chapter 1
Interesting! It kind of reminds me of my own Paper Tigers (recently abandoned). I guess a bad-boy wanting to be good is always a hot one, huh? Haha. I love how Rina is so passive. I hope we see some nice character development from her if you continue this story.

I would've read Cut & Paste, but I'm ultra-busy writing for As You Wish, and I wanted to put up the review story as one of YOURS.
Maiya 2005-07-25 . chapter 1
Hello there! The chapter could use a little revision on the grammar and spelling though, but you know what? I like the way this story is going. I'm looking forward to your next chapters. ^_^
Phantasy Projects 2005-07-24 . chapter 1
Wow, it's very good in my opinion, rich in detail and I liked to transaction. Sorry, I can't put many things into a review at the moment xD! But I like it, I look forward to the next chapter =)
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