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qblisa
2006-12-08
ch 1,
abuseI think you captured the ups and downs of life perfectly.
Life if nothing (empty) -> A drug which makes you soar -> It crashes and you are empty again.

It's an endless cycle of torture and pleasure. It's life and death, because without one, the other can't exist.

Wow, great writing.
Lisa
Bella Natty
2005-09-19
ch 1, anon.
abuseHey...(always too lazy to log in!)Well...I did take a look in this poem! That I really liked...you could do a great writer someday!!

Keep it up!

xoxox

-Naty
AbstractMind
2005-07-24
ch 1,
abuseit started out good and I like some of the similies and metaphores, but how is death a new life?- if death is nothing?
iona-buss
2005-07-24
ch 1,
abusenicely written. very well structured with a good flow. well done. keep writing. :)
Crimson-Fantasy
2005-07-24
ch 1,
abusenice poem i agree with the points you have made and it has beautiful immagry to it you are very talanted and express things well keep it up R&R sometime if you wish
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