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| qblisa 2006-12-08 ch 1, | abuseI think you captured the ups and downs of life perfectly. Life if nothing (empty) -> A drug which makes you soar -> It crashes and you are empty again. It's an endless cycle of torture and pleasure. It's life and death, because without one, the other can't exist. Wow, great writing. Lisa |
| Bella Natty 2005-09-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey...(always too lazy to log in!)Well...I did take a look in this poem! That I really liked...you could do a great writer someday!! Keep it up! xoxox -Naty |
| AbstractMind 2005-07-24 ch 1, | abuseit started out good and I like some of the similies and metaphores, but how is death a new life?- if death is nothing? |
| iona-buss 2005-07-24 ch 1, | abusenicely written. very well structured with a good flow. well done. keep writing. :) |
| Crimson-Fantasy 2005-07-24 ch 1, | abusenice poem i agree with the points you have made and it has beautiful immagry to it you are very talanted and express things well keep it up R&R sometime if you wish |