OMG MEG!...omg...why why why why why why why why why...I wanted a poem that showed you werent alone...or what you have in life...or any thing with out pain...but i didnt mean this...i know u said it was a sex story...but i didnt think it was in that much detail...you scared the shit out of me...my god...I dont know what to say about this...it shows passion...and a lot of it if you know what i mean...(from kyle...WTf)...i dont know what to say so lets leave it at that...O.o

Okay...That was bad..seriously..really bad. Obviously, you know nothing about sex; you could have went into deeper detail.. I have seen worse though. Sorry, just maybe read more on the topic and take notes or something.

Love ya,Shay

I'm sure that stired your boyfriend up. That was hot. Good Job.