wow, I really enjoyed this.

your imagery is great, the words just flow together and it's really powerful.

I like the image of the moon as the helper or protector a lot. good job.

Sad, but I like it...really reminds me of my ex.

interesting ending. very well written

very beautiful ignore it if you want to but i wonder if the lines might be stronger if it said "You were leaving, I had already left."good work ~evaa