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| Erisah Mae 2007-09-03 ch 20,  | abuseThis is gorgeous, realistic, and well-written. I loved the contrasting characters that you featured, and the subtle development of the various relationships. Nice. Erisah |
| gulistanlik 2007-08-05 ch 20, | abuseAww this really was wonderful. It touched me, it really did. I couldn't help cooing. At first, I wasnt sure who Jamie was going to end up with, but she really did end up with the right person. You're a writer with works of a high quality. Congratulations of a job well done! Gulistanlik |
| gulistanlik 2007-08-05 ch 19, | abuseWhat I dont understand is how this is all Ben's fault? I mean Jamie did go herself and get herself into that mess. |
| gulistanlik 2007-08-04 ch 16, | abuseGee Jamie's one to talk- she should be doing teh same with Dave. It would hurt more to ignore the pending relationship. Heh. Onto the next chapter! |
| gulistanlik 2007-08-04 ch 15, | abuse“I’m um, sorry to interrupt,” Jack said, his face as red as mine. “But Aunt Jessie wanted you two to know that the little kids will be getting off the bus soon and she doesn’t think they’re old enough to witness that type of thing.” OMG! That was I think the most funniest thing in this chapter! AHAHAH! Onto the next chapter! |
| gulistanlik 2007-07-28 ch 13, | abuseWow, they broke up. It looks like it's going to be Dave and Jamie then, eh? haha. I was so used to the idea that Dave would only be a best friend and that Ben would some wonderful and yet mysterious boyfriend. |
| gulistanlik 2007-07-28 ch 12, | abuseOh darn. Now Ben's gone and made it worse for Jamie to decide. Must read on! |
| gulistanlik 2007-07-28 ch 10, | abuseShe's cheating on Ben...uh-oh. Now I have no idea who is going to be ditched. Gah! It's so unpredictable. |
| gulistanlik 2007-07-28 ch 9, | abuseDamn. Like a love triangle. Though I'm not completely sure. Both guys like the same girl and the girl is stuck between both. Now I'm not sure whether she's going to end up with the best friend or mystery guy. Have to read on. |
| gulistanlik 2007-07-28 ch 7, | abuseWTH? I know she's just started dating Ben but I think she should at least, I dunno, talk to him a little? Hmm, she's calling Dave eh? Let's see what happens. |
| gulistanlik 2007-07-28 ch 6, | abuseUh-oh. Ben is going to be really disappointed when he finds out Jamie is going to the homecoming with someone else- namely Dave. |
| gulistanlik 2007-07-28 ch 5, | abuseOMG! Yay! But since there's another 15 chapters- I sense a twist in Ben's life and past that's kind of going to put the two's relationship on hold. And I know Dave's going to step back, jealous. Oh dear. Interesting very interesting. |
| gulistanlik 2007-07-28 ch 4, | abuseHah! I knew ALL along that Dave had a thing for Jamie. And now the two like her. I mean sure, Jamie might've figured a little with Ben but Dave? haha nope. She's dense dammit! And she has platonic feelings for Dave eh? Haha. Onto the next chapter! |
| vballgurl 2007-04-16 ch 20, | abusethis story is so fantastic and wonderful. Thank you for a truly wonderful dance story! |
| vballgurl 2007-03-13 ch 2, | abuseaw, i did ballet for seven years... dance stories have such a special place in my heart! Actually my 1st ever fic is about a dancer. I really love this and can't wait to keep reading! |