She's cheating on Ben...uh-oh. Now I have no idea who is going to be ditched. Gah! It's so unpredictable.

Damn. Like a love triangle. Though I'm not completely sure. Both guys like the same girl and the girl is stuck between both. Now I'm not sure whether she's going to end up with the best friend or mystery guy. Have to read on.

WTH? I know she's just started dating Ben but I think she should at least, I dunno, talk to him a little? Hmm, she's calling Dave eh? Let's see what happens.

Uh-oh. Ben is going to be really disappointed when he finds out Jamie is going to the homecoming with someone else- namely Dave.

OMG! Yay!

But since there's another 15 chapters- I sense a twist in Ben's life and past that's kind of going to put the two's relationship on hold.

And I know Dave's going to step back, jealous. Oh dear. Interesting very interesting.

Hah! I knew ALL along that Dave had a thing for Jamie. And now the two like her. I mean sure, Jamie might've figured a little with Ben but Dave? haha nope. She's dense dammit! And she has platonic feelings for Dave eh? Haha. Onto the next chapter!

this story is so fantastic and wonderful. Thank you for a truly wonderful dance story!

aw, i did ballet for seven years... dance stories have such a special place in my heart! Actually my 1st ever fic is about a dancer. I really love this and can't wait to keep reading!

This is a really cute story, and the plot is well developed. I can't wait to read more of your stories.

It seemed like it all ended too abruptly but I really liked this story. Something very different from Aelyn's Story. Both are great reads, thank you!

to continue from the last review: I care about your writing enough to send it to my email so I can download it to my desktop and read it. I don't have free reign on the internet right now but every once in awhile i can be on for a few minutes and I'll use that minute to get your story on to my computer to read.

keep writing!

Hey I'm reading your story. It's nice to see a different kind of style from you. I'm admittedly not as into this one as I was with Aelyn's story but I can see some great potential and I know you are a great writer so I keep on reading. I think I just prefer the medieval and fantasy stories. The characters in this one are interesting and I can't wait to hear more about them.

There's only one word to describe this story: Horrible

I'm kidding! OMG! This story was absolutely awesome. It was one of the best that I've ever read. Honestly. Keep up the good work. :)

Nah, I think you did a fine job with a modern story. It was very well done, interesting and romantic, and just overall very well-written.

I love this story! I'm sitting here now crying because it's so beautiful, and I know the song as well so it's just awesome!