|Reviews for Book I : Inner Demon|
| Safekht 3/6/06 . chapter 12
Maybe I haven't been reviewing (or just don't remember if I have), but I've been reading because you're on my author alert. That's beside the point, isn't it? While it does seem to get a bit mushy (it IS a romance, which I know is hypocritical of me) it's a GOOD mushy. Especially with Mundus not talking. Soak up the angst.
Maybe I wasn't supposed to recognize this, or maybe I was. Isn't it weird that Ram comes along when Dante isn't around? And that he lives in the same area as Dante? Hmm... Minono... but I betcha you'll clear that up soon... right?
| amelia 3/6/06 . chapter 12
interesting story. is ram another demon? or just some guy? anyways keep up the good work and keep updating. i want to know what happens. :)
| S.S. Dailey 3/6/06 . chapter 12
Great chapter. I want to know more about Ram, he seems like a very interesting character. Keep it up. I want more.
P.S. Chapter 36 of Souls Unknowing is now up.
| Lady Silver fang 3/6/06 . chapter 12
Wow! Great Chappie loved it! Write more soon!
| Viera Wing 3/5/06 . chapter 12
This chapter has a bit more spelling mistakes than usual. But it does bring up some interesting questions. Good work.
| A Beautiful Nightmare 3/5/06 . chapter 12
Hello. This was a great chapter... and by the way... Mundus should pair with Reyna NOT Ayame... hehe... and the Ram guy is creepy... I know he's up to something... I JUST KNOW IT! Oh, yeah... I'm the first to review too! Chapter Two of my story is almost finished... I'm not sure when I'll be able to post it though... I need to get it over with my beta-readers first... hehe... but I know it's going to be good... or I hope so at least...
| Moonlight Rain 2/23/06 . chapter 11
Great chapter:) You did a great job with the details:)
| Lady Silver fang 2/23/06 . chapter 11
Great Chapter I loved it write more!
| A Beautiful Nightmare 2/22/06 . chapter 11
Hey! You finally updated! I waited forever... I thought you gave up on the story from the lack of reviews last chapter... I'm so glad you updated... this was an awesome chapter... it left goosebumps when it described the book... whoa... is Reyna going to hate Mundus now that she knows the truth?
| Viera Wing 2/20/06 . chapter 11
Hello and finally! Took you long enough. You gonna blame your brother on everything? Tsk-tsk, how irresponsible.
Kidding. Glad you got your share of the computer back. Good chapter. Interesting.
| S.S. Dailey 2/19/06 . chapter 11
Awesome chapter! This is such a great story. I like how Mundus and Reyna are actually getting along now. Keep it up and I will be looking for more.
P.S. I have updated Souls Unknowing. Chapter 22 is now up.
| Kelly 2/19/06 . chapter 11
Person, you so need to update! Try to read your stuff aloud before you post them or whatever you do with them.
| lolomgwriter 2/7/06 . chapter 10
wow keep it up. This is getting really interesting. I'll be waiting for the next update ;)
| Zetsuya 2/5/06 . chapter 10
another great chapter _
| Viera Wing 2/5/06 . chapter 10
That was a nice twist on the uncle. I really like the fact that Mundus seems to care for Reyna quite a bit. And thanks for your plenty reviews. Really got my hopes up that someone might like it (AAM). Unfortunately, I'm concentrating more on FT, so it'll be like March before I update that. To answer your question, the Chinese man died, I just didn't want to write down every murder. Getting short on ideas. And thanks for finding out my mistakes. I've corrected them. People might think that's weird, but I'm pretty much a perfectionist. So, yeah, I did it.
Anyway, now that I've caught up with your work, I think I now have the right to demand this of you: Please update!