A pretty long chapter for me, but full of good stuff to keep it going. It got a bit dull inbetween where she gets in the car, and gets out, but I assure you it wasn't enough to drive away a reader. The demon does seem to favor the word 'wench', although don't we all have a favorite word we like to use? Why should demons be any different, eh? Anyway, I think it is suitable to say that you have a great storyline going here, and I'm eager to see what happens next.

This is definitely one of the better stories I've stumbled upon lately! The chapter length is just right. I can't wait to see where you're going to take this story!

HOLY! Whats the next chapter gunna be please! keep writing!

amazing, i love ur vivid descriptions. and this demon sounds pretty yummy.

woah! was that cool or what! keep writing. i like this. though i did notice when you said "back and fourth" its actually "back and forth", no "u". lol s'ok. no harm done.

Wow! Awesome story, I'm hooked. Great job, and I'll be back fo chap two. :)