|Reviews for Book I : Inner Demon|
| Safekht 8/8/05 . chapter 2
A pretty long chapter for me, but full of good stuff to keep it going. It got a bit dull inbetween where she gets in the car, and gets out, but I assure you it wasn't enough to drive away a reader. The demon does seem to favor the word 'wench', although don't we all have a favorite word we like to use? Why should demons be any different, eh? Anyway, I think it is suitable to say that you have a great storyline going here, and I'm eager to see what happens next.
| eirien 8/6/05 . chapter 2
This is definitely one of the better stories I've stumbled upon lately! The chapter length is just right. I can't wait to see where you're going to take this story!
| Th1rt33n 7/25/05 . chapter 1
HOLY! Whats the next chapter gunna be please! keep writing!
| Bluestreamer 7/24/05 . chapter 1
amazing, i love ur vivid descriptions. and this demon sounds pretty yummy.
| IAmAFighter 7/24/05 . chapter 1
woah! was that cool or what! keep writing. i like this. though i did notice when you said "back and fourth" its actually "back and forth", no "u". lol s'ok. no harm done.
| candycane-collage 7/24/05 . chapter 1
Wow! Awesome story, I'm hooked. Great job, and I'll be back fo chap two. :)