I don't see why you have to personify a supposed perfect being. I believe in god but not in the pious sense like you do and I find it better to see him as the entity who threw me in the world.

How can we be certain of the sins we speak of? Why should we always blame humanity when perhaps God just wants us to let him be?nonetheless, good poem.

True, but it's a blessing knowing God is always there for us no matter what we do. Awesome poem, keep on writing. God Bless ya!

Needa S.

Hmm...I liked how your poem began, putting into poetry all the things God has made. It was also a nice transition into explaining about Adam and Eve. One thing that gets a little tiring is how you always blame humanity for ignoring God, taking Him for granted, etc. etc. and while this is true and good you spread the message we do this to help us realize...I just find it is repetitive in almost all of your poems about God. Not that it's a bad thing, really.

lithiumroses: To maybe help with your quistions, you might want to check out this link that can be found on (pen name) Evangelical fp account- http://w.godandscience.org

To i-believe-in-God...keep writing for Him! God bless, silent.

your poem is good really, but i only have one question, don't you ever question whether there REALLY is a God? i mean he's the "holy spirit" a man how could one person or w/e create the whole world? i think honestly people created their own evil and as for who created us, i have no idea, .and although i don't believe in God, i am telling you the truth, your poem IS good..