This was cool. Good story.

AWESOME! Thanks so much for the great read, can't wait to read your future stories (and more of your current ones :)! Question though, could there possibly be an epilouge for this storie or is it completely finished (either way, it rocks and I enjoyed reading it very much :)!

Ah, the second story in so many days that's hopelessly rushed and sadly under developed. Seriously, you need to take what you have here and full it out, double or triple the chapter legnth. It could be a really great story, but there's no characterization, no description... Make it better, I know that you can.

Wow, this was amazing! So sweet and yet a lot of interesting plot

That's sweet.

Pretty good story. Some of the time transitions were confusing due to the lack of dividing lines or starts or whatever you want to call them. I felt Nikki changed a bit too drastically from the hardass to the lovey-dovey type; I had been hoping you would keep her more like you had first presented her. Overall though, fairly well written, with few grammatical errors. Nice job ]

Good read, I liked it.

Too bad that Nicole's father screwed up so much. And I really liked Meggie :p Especially how sweet she was to Nikki, even though she was so rough to her. Poor fish though xD

Good story, it was really thrilling to read all these chapters.

yay!..awesome!...a happy ending once again, not that i'm complaining..i'm a sucker for happy endings...thanks for sharing this story:)

this is good

This is like, one of the best story I've ever read on fictionpress... Seriously. continue the good work .

great story

did u wrote the story Janet? if so what happened to it?if not do you know where it is?

Good job as usual

Good job