Amazing story.

This is, as it always has been, excellency at work. It seems John is going to betray Grafnon to the King. But the monestary being desecrated... was that a lie, or was it truth? *Can't tell*. I'm still reading!

Heheh. Nice sign-off line, there. Although I must say that I'm disappointed in Grafnon's attitude toward Naomi. He'd better save her! The Dark Master was behind the beatings? Can't say I'm surprised... I mean... he has the word "Dark" in his name. Heheh.

Odd... that definitely wasn't Grafnon, because I'm pretty sure he wouldn't whip and torture his lover... or, for that matter, feel satisfaction that all the Grektarian soldiers were slaughtered. But I'm curious to discover the son-of-a-** who's actually behind it all. Another great chapter, of course!

Wow, that was a pretty brief conception, heheh. Still good, however. So Naomi's child is a little bastard, eh? And he wants to wipe out the dragons? Interesting. *Continues reading*

Ooh, things are heating up now! The Dark Master is aware of Grafnon, and soon the King will be too. I can't decide if I'm happy about that or not. XD But I hope he rescues poor Naomi before she's digested! Bah... of course he will. Anyway... *delves back into story eagerly* Still lovin' it!

I really like this story. It's shaping up to lead into an epic adventure. This dragon complicates matters, but who can have an adventure story without one of those? XD

I will review the chapters as I go along. Not each one, mind you, but I'll read it all. You're a great writer. I can't wait to see what happens to Naomi and Grafnon.

lol, I like how Grafnon isn't too worried about Naomi. Sure, he just slept with her after such a long time of wanting to, and then took off, and now she's being digested by some water dragon. No big deal. =)

wow. i liked this one! i wish i would have had more time to read this a long time ago! i wish i was brave enough to have something like this chapter so early in my story!

Wow, I like it. I can't wait till I read a little more into the history that these two characters seem to have together. I like the intensity between them best of all though.

i bet the woman the dark mage was talking about was Naomi. i hope the king doesnt take such drasic measures and really do that. good chapter as always! also i may not be able to finish this story for a while b/c i am moving today and might not have the internet for a while. i might print out the next few chapters to give me something to do this week while my b/f is at work and im there by my self.

~SarahJane

ah now i see why he was so evil. he was being manipulated to do what the dark master wanted him to do. lets hope he gets back to Naomi in time.

~SarahJane

Hm. that was an interesting chapter. wonder why they wanted them apart? and is this Elsie character the same one as the story before this? just a thought.

~SarahJane

ahh i see why he wanted her for so long. they were betrothed. and wow that must suck to be swallowed by a dragon. i hope he finds a way to save her soon!

~SarahJane

wow that was one hot chapter! looks like the finally found what they were looking for in each other. great work as always! cant wait to keep reading!

~SarahJane