That was interesting. The romance was a little cliche, perhaps, but still entertaining nonetheless. I loved the last line. :-) Learn to to rely a little less on cliche's and your writing style could end up to be very good indeed!

Haha, I loved the ending. Anyway, this was a great little story. I love the idea about the chamelion (ugh, I just know that's not spelled right...) people. You should go further with this! I'd like to learn more about the Dacostases.

~E1pnvn