i'm lovin this story, please update soon!

so you should really continue this story because it's really good. I really like the 2 different group rivalry it's really interesting.

This story is awesome. It blows my mind how you can keep track of it all! I can't wait to read more!

i like this story. wen are u goin to update??

AHH!! I love how this story is processing. I hope the 4 friends doesnt seperate because of their likes in guys! T.T but it will be interesting xD. Well thank you for the chapter and i hope you post soon :D

This is so cool! I hope you update soon!

great characters, great plot, great feud, great dialogue

i vote a mix between options 2 and 3. get rid of the short random spy stuff. they can still have all the snooping (we're girls its in our DNA). but maybe dont have every chapter switch. You can still get the big picture from one point of view, just randomly bring back a different point of view to mix it up.
P.S. im so glad you wrote a new chapter. i've been dying to see where this goes. your a great writer, keep it up :)

i like the alternating point of views from the different characters. i think yu should continue writing it that way.

if yu are going to rewrite than maybe yu should take the spy out cause your story is great with just the feud going on.

but i love where the story is right now :)
so maybe yu could finish this one and rewrite another one?


please do update.
:)

omg. i love this story :)
the spy thing was totally random though but it makes the story better :)
i really wonder who keeps texting tess

Hi,

Iv been following this story for a while but havent reviewed before, sorry!!

Though i have to say it is a really great story and has a very interesting plot. So definitely keep it up.

As for the options you suggested, i think the third option is more better and requires less work as the spy/CIA thing was definitely weird and unrealistic and so it will give you the opportunity to focus on the groups rivalry more and develop the characters further. However, which ever option you decide to choose is fine by me and i will definitely continue to read.

Hope to see another update soon.

xZarx

My joy when I saw that you had updated this story was nearly ineffable. Haha, I am so so happy to see that you updated! Not much really happened in this chapter, which is upsetting because I love Ads.

Okay, now I would be extremely upset if you got rid of the alternating viewpoints. I think it's one of the things that makes this story so different and charming. The girls are so different and they each view life in a different way, so the story is really more enriching because of the alternating viewpoints. And I really would not stand having to read 4 separate stories. It's just not the same, really.

I think that the best idea is to take the spy stuff out. The story really doesn't need it, and you could definitely revamp the story very quickly by removing those sections. All you'd really lose is that one chapter (chapter 6) and small bits of the chapters to follow. I think a rivalry is enough drama, no need for spies and the like if you already have Roche Limit.

Best of luck with your writing!

I like this story! honestly, I don't care which option you go with for this story. I'm sure I'll love it anyway :) great job, update soon!

I like option 3 the best. I don't really like 2 because I think it'd probably take too long, but I think either 1 or 3 would work. I like the spy stuff, but with Roche Limit, it wont matter so much if this story has that stuff.

whatever you choose, good luck!

I hate option 2, but options 1 n 3 r okay. I prefer 3, because the spy stuff is really random even though it's awesome. Number 1 is okay too, but I get confused to who is the narrator