|Reviews for Crimson stream|
| darkmistresslae 10/13/05 . chapter 1
This is an pretty okay poem. It's cool how you got your point across powerfully, despite the shortness. The shortness makes it difficult to really look into the poem, I think, but I still thinks it's alright. One thing: the metaphore "crimison tears" is a *b*i*t* overused. So yeahh... Other than that though, good short poem.
| Sarah-Brighteyes 8/3/05 . chapter 1
This was imagery that was vivid. ALmost vampric, at least that was what I was thinking. Very nice. So far this is my favorite of yours.
| FunkyFlower 7/27/05 . chapter 1
wow! amazing haiku. great bio by-the-way. quite unique. awesome work. well done!:-)
| An-Author-At-Heart 7/27/05 . chapter 1
So much emotion in so few words! Nice, it has impact. I like the metaphor you used, "the flood I shed for you". Good imagery, good job.
| Ebony Stars 7/26/05 . chapter 1
it's painful, but also soft and calm. I love it
| Nobody-n-Particular 7/25/05 . chapter 1
| Ygg 7/25/05 . chapter 1
Wow this is so tragic! Especially the first line and the use of "flood" and "crimson" conveys such sad emotions.. Such a marvelous and deep imagery! Furthermore, the flow is also wonderful in this poem! Really rolls off the tongue. Splendid work! Please keep writing more :)
PS. Thank you for your reviews :-)