This is an pretty okay poem. It's cool how you got your point across powerfully, despite the shortness. The shortness makes it difficult to really look into the poem, I think, but I still thinks it's alright. One thing: the metaphore "crimison tears" is a *b*i*t* overused. So yeahh... Other than that though, good short poem.

This was imagery that was vivid. ALmost vampric, at least that was what I was thinking. Very nice. So far this is my favorite of yours.

wow! amazing haiku. great bio by-the-way. quite unique. awesome work. well done!:-)

So much emotion in so few words! Nice, it has impact. I like the metaphor you used, "the flood I shed for you". Good imagery, good job.

it's painful, but also soft and calm. I love it

Quite passionate.

Wow this is so tragic! Especially the first line and the use of "flood" and "crimson" conveys such sad emotions.. Such a marvelous and deep imagery! Furthermore, the flow is also wonderful in this poem! Really rolls off the tongue. Splendid work! Please keep writing more :)

PS. Thank you for your reviews :-)