well, just to let u know, ur NOT crazy. because if u are, then so am i because i understood this poem scaringly well. but, newayz, yes, good job and KW!! and thanx for the reviews i enjoyed them...~davida

You have one of the most unique writing styles I have ever seen. Even though some people I know say your style is not true poetry, I disagree. When I can feel what the writer is trying to convey, can see, can almost touch, that is when it is true poetry. Very lovely. I love it. Please keep writing and thanks for reviewing!

Awesome formatting! I love the "rotating" and everything. :D

Intense here, but still good. It kind of sounds like it's rhyming on places it's not actually. haha And yep you can put the Hauki there if you'd like. :) cya

Crazy. Without a doubt- crazy. I didn't "get" all of this but I liked the line about everywhere you look there is love, pain and hate. Not the exact wording but I hope you get which line I mean. I'm not really sure what to make of this but certain lines made sense. Luv Kaitx