I like this, it's so delicate.

Oh, wow. I like this one. It's very soothing.

I like this... it's beautiful & well written

Nice poem very pretty I love the metaphor thingy.

I love the description.

wow, awesome imagery~~ lol~ yeah, liking someone will and is hard>< feel like murdering them at times~~ lol~

keep writing!

*gushes over the poem* this is amazing sumi-chan, the words pierce ones heart and hit a place so deep and leave such a fantastic message and power in one's heart. my body is weak by the amazing affect this has on me and how well it is portrayed, beautiful, beautiful, beautiful. love it.

~* noelle