Wow, that is so true. Please write another poem like this, if you can. This one was very good!

XOXO,Zoey

This was very interesting. You portray confusion very well. Please continue writing!

This is a topic I always feel before the relationship even really starts. Lol! But well I guess it happens to us all.

Very good. You described many things the narrator went through as she tried to sort out her feelings.

That was really well written, and I tihnk you really 'caught' the feeling that comes along with breaking up. Good, I liked it ^_^