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| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-07-26 ch 1,  | abuseI love the casual feel to this that lends so strikingly to the depth of the emotions. The slang style can relate to many people, for most people think like such but complicates matters in a real-life kind of light. |
| The Proxy Ninja 2005-07-25 ch 1, | abuseI've never seen such a voice in poetry as yours on all of Fictionpress.com. It's commendable because of its conversational nature, it really has a great voice. [shout till the word’s have lost] *words. [or those ladybug'sshe loved so much] uploading error. but also, *ladybugs. And, "till" is for fields. ['till] is what you're looking for. I love the slang sound of this poem. It's natural rhythm and ambiance. The content and conceptual arrangement is wonderful. |