Beautiful imagery.

i liked this alot. it had alot of great imagry(i think thats the right word) um, yeah, good job and thanx for the review. and BTW, thanx for the words of comfort i really did appreciate them, and i didn't give them names out of courtesy of protecting their identity. i'm sorry, i know it would have been easier, but, unlike them, i was trying to be considerate. well, thanx again!

~davida

Very interesting I think I'll have to read this one a few times over to get it. So far it seems like you met someone on your wall...i think.

love the format and the style of this. very unique, i must say. i probably got the wrong idea what it's about though.

I love the contrasts esp. with the vertical and horizontal.

Very unique poem. I liked it, though my interpretation was probably wrong.

very unique style~~ the words have odd imapcts though i don't seem to know the whole situation~~ great job!!

keep writing!

Well, to tell you the truth, my understanding of the poem is probably as random as the poem itself (and I LIKE being random!) So I really enjoyed it, it's a nice purple and yellow piece (really, just don't ask!) And thanks for the review.