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chance crawley
2005-08-03
ch 1,
abusethis is a good poem i like the last line at the end it leaves a bit of mystery in it. i would guess that it has to do with one of ur girls but i cant tell right now im half asleep. so keep up the good work
Hopeless-and-helpless01
2005-07-26
ch 1,
abuseThat was extremely good. I had a dream about my dead cousin about 5 months ago. but that was for completly different reasons. I have a 6th sense which prob don't help :D Keep writing!Dani
Geese
2005-07-26
ch 1,
abuseI love it! It's so..real. Great job! =D
ShadoWings
2005-07-26
ch 1,
abuseI like the way you've worded all of this, it's great.

Um...maybe you fear of losing someone in the process of gaining something else? It's just a guess but it's known for dreams to tell your feelings.

Great job with the poem. Keep writing.
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