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| Julie AKA Hugo priestess 2005-08-01 ch 1,  | abuseI love Sevilen! The stories good too! |
| Mad-4-Manga 2005-07-31 ch 3, | abuseCool story! ^_~ VERY intriguing and awesome. The switching of view points was a bit confusing at first (since you had nothing labled or anything) but I eventually got the hang of it. Interesting story! ^_^ I can't WAIT to hear more! |
| Yami-Tenma 2005-07-29 ch 2, | abusePlz put in dividers between scene changes. |