wow charlotte, i had no idea you could write like this. its amazing, and i'm kind of proud of it for you. the words blend together so well its almost like they're something classic, from a thousand years ago. i like that you didnt try to rhyme, you just let it flow...great job hon. i love you char!
Oh wow. Fantastic poem, good flow, well written. I can't write poems that don't rhyme but this appears to be your forte! Flows well. You are really talented. x
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