WOW. This is amazing! one of the best I have ever read. Beautifully written! -Drea PS Thanks for your nice review! :D

Oh, what a lovely piece! It's ... it's so great I can't even think of any words to describe it. Really. It's ... whoa. AWESOME!

~ Lunchi

you dont know how hard I tried to write something like this. It turns out to be off when i try. You wrote the so well. You made the reader feel wheat she feels, and that is sometimes hard to do. You started strong, and ended strong which is a key thing in poetry. You are very talented, and this is a great poem. Keep up the writting! ~Kelsey

Who is this about, hm? xD

I think you could've taken out the 'up' in the first line.. but- small difference I know xD

Are you rhyming on purpose or accidentally? It's actually kind of interesting...

geese...thanks for reviewing!...i'm sorry if this really happened, but what a ** way to tell you, through a note?! what is this world coming to?