Hi Daphne!

Nice little poem, but the last stanza seems really strange to me. "Sight of world" doesn't fit either the rhythm or the... meaning? pattern?... of the rest of the poem. Also, I don't understand what "Sight of world" has to do with "Slight of word" at all. Can you clean that up? The first three stanzas are cool! Finish it up strong!

I like this. The format is really nice as well.

nice format... cool poem

This is such an interesting poem I read it through a couple of times to digest it... really well done-L

I like this poem alot. I like the mesage, it is all to true