Cool story. I like it a lot.

=) Mandraco.

great detail. not much to say yet. keep writing

This is a great prologue. Wonderful intro to the character and his history/future.

O, please continue this is interesting! Happy writing! :3

I like your story so far. There is only one thing I don't like about it and that is how you change sorcerers. It makes since to have the one die, but can you please skip the other part?You don't have to becasue it is your story, but I don't like it.

This is a really interesting fairytale xD I'm so surprised that it hasnt gotten any comments yet ;_; Ah well-i get to be the first then! I really am enjoying this-yup. The writing style is great and smooth and the description is nice ^_^ It kind of reminds me of an RPG-rofl. It would make a good one =3 Any who, I'm lovin' the names of your characters-they're creative but not overly difficult to pronounce =P I hope that Isdemus gets shoved off a cliff...what an evil bastard xDPlease keep writing! =D ~