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| Winter92 2008-08-24 ch 12,  | abusewell that has got to be bad for her |
| cheergurl12 2008-07-27 ch 12, | abuseupdate soon please cause I really love ur story!! |
| Amaryllis Faye 2008-07-08 ch 12, | abusethis have got to be finished! |
| everybodyloveschocolate 2008-05-25 ch 6, | abuseI bet he's going to eat her. |
| Super.Maddy 2008-04-18 ch 12, | abuseWha? I was reading and just getting into the story and i go to press the blue button and its gone! Oh no! I'm loving this story so far. Please update soon i know you havn't in a while :] Good luck with your other stories! xx Maddy |
| Olivia C. 2008-04-14 ch 6, | abusegreat story! |
| darkgurl92 2008-03-25 ch 12, | abuseomg...her dad sent her to the wrong place...oh no.. update soon |
| Estelin 2008-02-25 ch 12, | abusethis stroy was excellent. keep up the good wrok and writing. i can't wait to read more. |
| sweetbabii45 2008-01-26 ch 12, | abuseOMG love it! update update update update PLEASE! |
| Story Critic 2008-01-15 ch 12, | abusesweet!! if the baby is a girl can you name it winter please hat would be like the coolest name a girl can have...ta ta for now!! :P |
| Status-Writing 2007-10-29 ch 12, | abuseAh! Cliffhanger! No! xD I can't wait for the next chapter. This story is wonderful! :D [ Status ] |
| Fleeting Moment 2007-10-07 ch 12, | abuseUh ho, UPDATE! THat was awsome! |
| Eurgh 2007-09-30 ch 8, anon. | abuse3500 words and 10 pages later, and it STILL sucked!! WO! |
| Eurgh 2007-09-30 ch 4, anon. | abuseHis member? Her womenhood? Oh darling. Surely you can come up with something a little less Danielle Steel? |
| VenGeful AnGel 2007-08-26 ch 2, | abusewell, i like it a lot so far. it's humorous and has a hott guy in it! what else could someone want? just some helpful critique, though: develop the descriptions more. the characters are nicely formed, but a little more about them would be nice. lengthen things out a bit, too. just one more thing- some words get a bit repetative. honestly, i use a thesaurus when i feel i've used a word too much. just some advice. take it or leave it. ~alex |