*Picks jaw up off floor* Hauntingly beautiful.

WOW. I sort of caught a tune to it. Hm. Beuatiful. I love it. I love the line in the first stanza about shoulder blades. It's so... I don't know...different. Most poems focus on feelings, but then shoulder blades. An unexpected suprise that was most welcome. Bravo!

Has the feeling of pure emotion behind it..wow that sounded corny, but its true. the poem bleeds with want, anger. i love how part of it is a sort of question...great job.