Very good. The 'I was created for this...' was eerie in a way.

well written...something I haven't seen written yet except now but very good. touching and the thing about it is...it really does happen with teens now a days..especially those my age..

~Sorrow~

o, sexual content.sorry, just had to say that.

feriocious, if that can be said, then there.

i am listening to fall out boy right now, and that really reminds me of the concept, plus this weather, its to hot.bah sun and sunblock.

interesting, dirty little secerets.secrets could bring us all down in the end.

i like how it's cut up in sections by the...'sh"'s and the format, it makes it more intense and seductive.

I love, love, love the erotic, totally seductive tone to this. It rocks.

Great description in this, so seductive.

*shivers* this is utterlu fantastic. I can not praise this enough without sounding like an unintelligiant idiot. beautiful poem and over flows with emotion, I deeply enjoyed it.

~* noelle