Ah, Chris, your writing reminds me of home, so far away now. Did I mention this is really good and I like it? I may have already reviewed it. It's been so long, I can't remember. It's good though. I keep checking to see if you've written new things or not...but alas! usually you haven't. *sigh* Keep up the good work though.

Very nice. Good use of rhymes and rhythm

Well, I really enjoyed that. Rhyme seemed forced a few places, but I liked it still. Actually, the only one that seems awkward is "plugged" and "bunged" but oh well. I really like the way the rhythm is in "and there'll be nothing left to live for." Overall, I like it and it seems like a pretty good work of writing. Probably one of the poems you've written that I like more than others.