| Reviews for Poppies |
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Oracle of Destiny 3/28/08 . chapter 4This is really good - I liked the imagery especially the last line :) |
Oracle of Destiny 3/28/08 . chapter 3this is really good - I would say that is a pure and untouched flower. |
Oracle of Destiny 3/28/08 . chapter 2Although I have not heard of kudzus before but they sure sound exotic in this poem. |
Oracle of Destiny 3/28/08 . chapter 1This reminds me of the poppies in a field back to pay respect to the dead of both World Wars. |
darknessblooms 1/9/06 . chapter 3Hey, I know...it's been awhile, hasn't it? Thanks for being a faithful reader and I'm so glad you liked it. :)And I love 'Wisteria'. Like something in a dream...very beautiful. |
Ang-Dev 9/17/05 . chapter 1this is a beautiful haiku. i remember in primary school here in britain, poppies grew on the field where some famous war took place (maybe world war 1) so we used to buy fake poppies and wear them, sending money to charity. anywayz, this reminded me of that. its very accurate and beautiful in its own way, great job:-) ang/mez |
Ang-Dev 9/17/05 . chapter 5is this a type of flower? sorry, i'm a total ignorant person of wild life and stuff so i probably sound stupid. i like the haiku, its very vivid and easy to imagine. i read one of your stories, i forget which 1, it had its second chp about flowers so i wondered if flowers is one of ur hobbies? interesting haiku, great job:-) ang/mez aka funkyflower14 |
simpleplan13 8/26/05 . chapter 3beautiful (reminds me of bean trees) |
simpleplan13 8/26/05 . chapter 2cool |
simpleplan13 8/26/05 . chapter 1very cute & well done... I like it... thanks for your review |
Nobody-n-Particular 8/24/05 . chapter 4Such words! And passion! |
s m e l l . o f . r a i n 8/24/05 . chapter 3Hmm. I like the way you worded this. ) (A reply to your question- all my vignettes are seperate pieces, so no, there won't be a collection.) |
Blood-Dyed Skies 8/23/05 . chapter 1 Nice. ) I like how the middle line, "Nature once dormant now lives" acts as a bridge between the two other lines. But I'm not so sure about the third line- "Poppies peak shyly". Should it be 'peek'? But anyways. A delightful Haiku. |
SeaVoi 8/22/05 . chapter 3This cool, very vivid. |
SeaVoi 8/22/05 . chapter 1I like this, I thought the wording was awsome. |