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| xxstarinheaven 2005-11-10 ch 1, | abuseThat is very Meaning ful and at the same time so True, You should really write more poetry... Good Job... I mean REALLY good Job |
| aeolyn 2005-08-26 ch 1, | abusedark and chilling yet still retains its beauty. i don't think i could ever do that. great job! |
| youzi 2005-08-16 ch 1, | abusestrange, bizzare imagery that gave this piece much flavour..i was especially intrigued by the spider image.do keep writing =D |
| Mistress of Eternity 2005-08-08 ch 1, | abuseThis is definetly very, very dark. That's the beauty in it... Very, very lovely. Creepy, but lovely :) Nice job Bal. Love, Anna |
| Autumnred 2005-07-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseare you in any way influenced by Voldermort? ^^ I just thought of He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named when i read this. Well probably it's just me =p |
| poetic abortion 2005-07-27 ch 1, | abusethis is quite unusual but that does not stray from its beauty and utterly spinetingeling feel it emits. the poem is gorgeous, from the first line to the very last. and amazing piece that leaves one shivering still minutes after they have read. well done! ~* noelle |
| Blood-Dyed Skies 2005-07-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is great- as usual. ^^ The way it's kept kind of vague adds to it too. But I don't really understand the line "To the open arms of the spider", though I could've missed something. The atmosphere in the last stanza is particularly good, too. =) The adjectives you used- such as "Flying on blackened wings"- show an dark picture. |