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Reviews For: Broken Glass

Diretto Vertigo 2005-11-14 ch 1, anon.	abuseThat is so pretty...I think we've all felt like that before. Way to capture the moment! luv~*L
whatyoubargainedfor 2005-10-24 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis is a sad poem...But I really do like it. Keep up the good work and HAPPY WRITING! -what you bargained for
boys kiss girls 2005-10-14 ch 1,	abuseI think I know what (who) you're talking about here... but I only heard half of the story. :( It'll get better. It always will. "Things will always get better in the end, if they aren't better, then its not the end" -Will Nussbaum (one of the coolest kids ever!)
R.T. michaels 2005-08-10 ch 1,	abusehow depressing. i like your use of description, the way you can easily compare yourself to something everyone knows, and the gentle pattern that it has. i just like it. good work
squid-pi06 2005-08-03 ch 1,	abusewow! it's really sad... i could understand it really well. nice work! ily! ihly! aysg! aynssg! aeib! pm!
ode to a firefly 2005-07-28 ch 1,	abuseAbsolutely beautiful. And you think you're not a good writer... HAH! I love the imagery with the broken glass. Oh, yes, and HAPPY BIRTHDAY! Love and hugs, Christine
demon in disguise 2005-07-27 ch 1,	abuseIt's really good. I like it. :) Great job. ~Struggling-soul
FrozenKiwi 2005-07-27 ch 1,	abuse~ That is sad. A good poem, but sad. Nice use of metaphor.