   miss-blackhair 2005-12-11 . chapter 3good job. update soon! =) |
 Elphaba Fuurfenschnuckle 2005-08-26 . chapter 2Dude- I know i said this once but I love your stuff and i hate you for being better than me. Write more. I'm still in love with Rourke! |
 JaveHarron 2005-08-12 . chapter 2 Interesting set up here. I like how there's a diverse group of operatives, each with their own quirky personalities. |
| miss-blackhair 2005-08-09 . chapter 2 hmm.. nice.. =) update! |
 dolce-gal 2005-08-07 . chapter 2I don't know what it is but I absolutely love these characters! Thanks for updating so soon. I can't wait for more! |
 Bloodflower 2005-08-01 . chapter 1Scott is way cool.
Love the way this is going, love the writing style, love the fact that you've actually got good grammar and spelling and stuff (something that can be kinda rare on this site. That wasn't meant to sound condescending, I hope it didn't.) Anyway, KEEP WRITING, because it would be totally criminal if you didn't finish this! You're going on my author alert and this is going on my favorite stories... |
| Elphaba Fuurfenschnuckle 2005-07-31 . chapter 1 You absolutly need to write more! I find it to be one of the best stories I have ever read, and it is only one chapter long. Your characters are great- I love Rourke Hassell- he seems to be the best out of all of them. I AM BEGGING YOU! PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE write More! |
| dolce-gal 2005-07-28 . chapter 1 I can't wait to hear more about these characters!! Fantastic first chapter. I'm hooked already! |
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