Yes, I think this is my favorite one.

Absolutely beautiful.

:)

My favorite of your poetry, very beautifully written, the repetition of the dusty floor really adds to the mood of the poem. Very nice.

I liked it. It was good your good with detail.

Very nice...and by that, I mean it was fantastic. I love thw hole "dusty floor" repetition. It's gorgeous. With regards, Writer of Darkness