Good poem! I luffles butterfly. Poor little one. This was a really good poem. I agree with what Gaki Toki said. Oh, if you'd like you can check out my other stuff on Desy-way. That's my new name. Anyways, keep writing. And I'll try to keep reading and reviewing.

That was sad and somewhat morbid. It goes deeper than my tired and weary mind can comprehend right now, I will have to just say that you are a talented writer to make my mind, in all its tired and exhausted glory, hurt. So thank you for writing such a wonderful and amazing poem, I may not be a poetry person but I know talent and skill when I see it. Well, I suppose I should stop boring you to the point your eyeballs fall from your face in heaps of smelly jelly...how awkward.

Much Love, Gaki Toki