|Reviews for Norse Mythology Haikus|
| Nobody-n-Particular 7/28/05 . chapter 5
Wow, nice play on words there with "mourning" or "morning" Beautiful.
| Nobody-n-Particular 7/28/05 . chapter 4
This has a nice, defiant tone to it.
| Nobody-n-Particular 7/28/05 . chapter 3
It is fine, although not descriptive.
| Ygg 7/28/05 . chapter 5
Oh this is nice! I really like the way you picked your words. Absolutely great imagery!
| Ygg 7/28/05 . chapter 4
| Ygg 7/28/05 . chapter 3
It's not thát bad to despise it :) Though the flow isn't optimal, it has a nice imagery. It's still quite an achievement to effectively write haikus about such specific figures from Norse mythology!
| Ygg 7/28/05 . chapter 2
About Alaisiagae: you captured their essence perfectly in yet another set of very powerful words! Great work.
| Ygg 7/28/05 . chapter 1
Oh you're starting a collection of Norse mythology haikus. Excellent ;)
I like Aegir, though I have to admit the flow is a bit broken in the second line.. Nevertheless, great imagery!
| Alex 7/27/05 . chapter 2
wow, some how Norse myth and haikus don't mix. I'd expect a Norse poem to be in - like - octametre or something more beowulfian. Not exactly an edda. Whatever, all is groovy!
| Nobody-n-Particular 7/27/05 . chapter 2
Glad you starting a Norse Mythology collection!
| Nobody-n-Particular 7/27/05 . chapter 1
| myheartiswaypastbeating 7/27/05 . chapter 1
Lacks flow, I think it could be could, but idk its kinda hard to read. I like the idea I guess, but I think it needs a little work. caliorbust