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| Reviews for Norse Mythology Haikus |
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   Nobody-n-Particular 7/28/05 . chapter 5Wow, nice play on words there with "mourning" or "morning" Beautiful. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 7/28/05 . chapter 4 This has a nice, defiant tone to it. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 7/28/05 . chapter 3 It is fine, although not descriptive. |
| Ygg 7/28/05 . chapter 5 Oh this is nice! I really like the way you picked your words. Absolutely great imagery! |
| Ygg 7/28/05 . chapter 4 Lovely! |
| Ygg 7/28/05 . chapter 3 It's not thát bad to despise it :) Though the flow isn't optimal, it has a nice imagery. It's still quite an achievement to effectively write haikus about such specific figures from Norse mythology! |
| Ygg 7/28/05 . chapter 2 About Alaisiagae: you captured their essence perfectly in yet another set of very powerful words! Great work. |
| Ygg 7/28/05 . chapter 1 Oh you're starting a collection of Norse mythology haikus. Excellent ;) I like Aegir, though I have to admit the flow is a bit broken in the second line.. Nevertheless, great imagery! |
| Alex 7/27/05 . chapter 2 wow, some how Norse myth and haikus don't mix. I'd expect a Norse poem to be in - like - octametre or something more beowulfian. Not exactly an edda. Whatever, all is groovy! |
| Nobody-n-Particular 7/27/05 . chapter 2 Glad you starting a Norse Mythology collection! |
| Nobody-n-Particular 7/27/05 . chapter 1 Lovely. |
| myheartiswaypastbeating 7/27/05 . chapter 1 Lacks flow, I think it could be could, but idk its kinda hard to read. I like the idea I guess, but I think it needs a little work. caliorbust |
