In so few words you can express so much and this has such an intense sense of emoton behind it.

aww really cool

Thud! (that is the sound of me falling out of my chair in awe) Simply beautiful. Keep writing! I want more!

this was really worded beautifully. i loved the way you split the verses with the bold lettering. This sounds so much like somehting one of the characters from STR would write. It's just...beautiful - it shows your writing skills off to a tee ::gives extra large celebratory cookie:: This part inparticular stood out to me: "Can't wait, every day/ To catch my breath for you"This was just a great piece, and the fact that it ties in with STR ((whether intentionally or no)) just makes it even better in my eyes. Keep up the amazing work ::smoochies::

luv ya muchly

emerald Ravenx x x

Oh man...I really do see STR in this. I do. Especially in the "We were always honest // Until that moment // When I knew there was something // I could never, ever, say". I want to think that it mirrors the feelings of one couple in particular, but I think that I could find references to all of them, at least on one or two levels. The poem just works in so many ways... The pacing, the bold words [as I read the first few verses, I thought that you were going for a sort of relationship level. And my brain was awkwardly trying to put together: first, you think someone is –beautiful-, then your mind redirects and you are their –friend-, then etc and etc. But that was a bit…well, full-of-holes, and I saw that you weren’t going for that. (Nice ramble there, huh? I hope you found that remotely interesting. :-D)]… There are just so many lines in this that I found worded beautifully [Can’t wait, every day // To catch my breath for you].

Definitely don’t hesitate to post more poetry. :-)

Very nice direction and style. I especially loved the last line. Nice work!

Best Wishes, Brittney