whe! free sombrero! where? where? hehehe. awesome story guys...

Lovely. It's great. Very hillarious! :-)

lol this was pretty pointless but still funny. lol

hahahahaha! one of our best stories, chels! so funny just like us!

alex

Wow. This is so obviously an inside joke that I think my review of it would be pointless. But perhaps ... add more spatial information (describe their surroundings, characters' movements, ect). The only part I found rather amusing was: "He begins to eat the mailbox and sits in the chair." It was too fast, too pell-mell ... more of a joke than a story, as was the point.