|Reviews for A Day At The Beach|
| lindsey 4/5/06 . chapter 1
whe! free sombrero! where? where? hehehe. awesome story guys...
| Particularly Clementine 7/29/05 . chapter 1
Lovely. It's great. Very hillarious! :-)
| Gurt Rude Malanos 7/27/05 . chapter 1
lol this was pretty pointless but still funny. lol
| Alexandrea Romanzesco 7/27/05 . chapter 1
hahahahaha! one of our best stories, chels! so funny just like us!
| Sophie August 7/27/05 . chapter 1
Wow. This is so obviously an inside joke that I think my review of it would be pointless. But perhaps ... add more spatial information (describe their surroundings, characters' movements, ect). The only part I found rather amusing was: "He begins to eat the mailbox and sits in the chair." It was too fast, too pell-mell ... more of a joke than a story, as was the point.