That's a sweet little poem. It actualy seems nice with out any rhyming, . . . although, that could never hurt. :)

I wish I could write like that... you're so good. I find it awsome that acctually get your work pubished. You deserve it. The only advice I can give you is to never stop writing because there may be someone out there who will be inspired by you and do great things for our world.- Changing the world one person at a time,Katie'Love never fails.' 1 Corinthians 13:8(KJV)

how romantic, escapeing form the world lovely to read

Hey, this was pretty sweet. I read "Love Me" too, and I thought this was a good follow up. You're lucky to have that special girl in your life. Write more soon!

Reina

So dep, you don't hold anything back! Good job as usual.

*Mr. Underhill.

Not bad...Can you please rate one of my poems I am kinda depressed right now because of a girl i like and your poem made me feel worse :( lol