It's so mysterious and sad. I don't know why it's sad, but it is. I like it.

~Maranwe

Hey, for only five minutes of your time, this was pretty good! My favorite lines were, "Breathing a life once lived. / I hear it crying a song of lost hope." Great job!

I like how throughout the poem, you talk about 'lost hope' and at the end, you say 'but not anymore'. I like this a lot, good job!If you like depressing stuff with hope at the end, try some of my stuff...you might like it.

W4J

very creepy. the poem reminds of someone who can't let go of a shadow of the past, a ghost who haunts them unknowing. I love it. sent pleasent shivers down my spine. your best, I would think. it is priceless and wonderfully crafted. just love it so much.

~* noelle

Its nicely done. My favorite out of the three you have.

o I like it its so sad 2! :> Good Job!

Beautiful :)

o, I like it!! I have a poem entitled 'My Shadow' as well. Only mine is... meh, different. whatever.. anyways, you did a great job. i love the line "breathing a life once lived." awesome!

Didn't I already review this? *looks confused* Right...oh wait, I get it now...you changed the last line like I suggested...still don't get why my other review didn't register, but whatever! lol Like I said, I really like this piece. Cool penname btw as well!! Thanks for your review of 'Scream' - it's always fun to get reviews on old stuff. Bye for now! *waves*