Now this one I liked a lot damaging and flowed nicely.

...powerful...

This hasn't happened to me in reviews, but there are people at my school who insult me for being a Christian. I agree with you. What has the world come to if you can't even love God in public without scorn?

I know how ya feel, believe me... I used to write on another part of this site under a different name. The flamers not only attacked me and my beliefs, but they started e-mailing me and saying all sorts of bad stuff about my family. I changed my name and started posting here not because I was scared of them, but because I got tired of reading their filthy reviews about me and our dear Savior. It's sad people are so cruel. I pray those people change their ways before its to late. God Bless ya and keep on writing for Christ.

Needa S.

nice rhyme and flow. good job and an excellent way to state what you believe in and stand up for yourself.

Amen Girl! What a stand! I was reading the flame review in your bio and I just want you to know that I am so sorry. Sometimes people can be ignorant and cruel but that's what makes us stronger. I can't wait to read more of your work. Keep it up! Oh and thanks for the review. It really means a lot to in Christ,Lady of the Moonless Night

Bravo! Bravo! I completely understand how you feel! People in this world now days are quite simply pathetic. They talk of one thing, and they turn on it, two-faces. Its unbelievable! Love the poem. Keep it going.

Lately, this society has become more and more against those that hold a greater power than they do, jealousy in them, maybe? This is very well written, if I do say so myself, and I may not go to church whenever I get the chance, but I know many people who are going what you are going through, and at times like this it's best to stay strong and not flinch at what they say. Showing a reaction has always made the protagonist react more. In God's Name,MDND

interesting. i like it, and i can relate because people say things about me because i don't believe in God. I think that everyone should just get along, regadless of all that, and I see that is your true message. good work