this is interesting. i like hearing about how they are growing up togeather. are you going to contiue it until they are older?anyway good story.

*smiles* i like this chapter!

Thongs for five year olds? **cries**

(I'm french, so I apologize for all the mistakes i'll must make). I like Holly's story a lot, because it's so much true that girls are growing-up too fast nowadays. Well, it's more that they start acting seductive (does that mean anything ? o.O Hope you understand me) too early, they don't even know what love (between lovers) is !I can also see here that more and more girls began to act irrespectuously (I hope that this word actually exist o.O) towards their olders. Really, I can't stand it when 12 or 13-years-old look down at me. They're so dumb thinking that they worth more than anyone else only because they wore expensive or fashion clothes. Anyway, I also like your others story a lot, and I really hope that soon we'll be able to read Zach and Kyle's story, about when they'll be older. Oh, and Kurt and Diego too ! I like the German boy a lot XDSo, hm, thank you for writting this, congratulation and I hope you'll write their story soon :p

whoah... thongs for five year olds... er... thats stupid. i mean, why the hell would five year olds want thongs? to attract stupid old man who depends on viagra to even make their dick grow one cm? anyway, nice chapter1 update soon k? btw, you changed the title right?

Oh, I thought that you stole his name from that bald techno guy...

Heheh, that's a great way to meet a friend. I don't even remember how I met most of my friends...

hm... based on you and your friend huh? lemme guess... next thing both of you would do is just ramble bout how hot it is when guys make out with each ohter. right?

Heh, cute. Karlee's like a future yaoi fangirl...which is pretty damn awesome, if you ask me. I became a fangirl when I was 13...or was it 12? **is not sure**

I didn't even consider the idea before then.

first time reviewing something that is rated below R here. but. but i only reviewed this cause its bloody cute... i mean look at how innocent this kids are... kinda make me ashamed of how fast i lost my innocence... (blushes). anyway keep the work up

So far it's coming along nicely. In previous chapters some of the things they would say didn't really sound like something a child in third grade would say, but that's alright. Looking forward to more.

I've been reading this and I feel bad 'cause this is the first time I've reviewed. Even though I'm not too good with words and such, here goes:

So far, I'm not sure what to think of the characters exactly. I mean, this is just the beginning, right? I'm going to have to continue reading before I can make any sort of hypothesis about what's going to happen or have any real opinion of the characters.

This is a cute story, and I can't help not liking Zach..he reminds me of myself in the third grade..always reading, and being diffrent then everyone else...hehe, I'm still a lot like that, just that I've gone hyper, and I'm not such a loner anymore.

aww, poor Zachy...that's so sad. I like him though, he's a great character. update soon! BYE!

I like this chapter to...but that sounds too weird..."you wanna come over and play with me cat?" haha, sounds fun...can't wait. ^.^ update soon. I like Zach...