|Reviews for Your Love, My Poison|
| Martin Peterson 9/11/05 . chapter 1
The structure works very well, and I like the confused mixture of passion and hatred. Despite the emotional pain, it still has an almost erotic feel to it.
| blackrosestears 8/25/05 . chapter 1
Wow. Awesome stuff. Short and to the point, which is sometimes a good thing to do, in this case it was a good thing to do. It flows job.
| The Fourth Fate 8/23/05 . chapter 1
Don't be sorry! The choppiness is a great effect. Beautiful! I hope this isn't true. It's so heart wrentching...
| Britani- Friend of the Bears 8/15/05 . chapter 1
THIS IS NOT CHOPPY IN ANY WAY...ilove it...*pops raison into mouth*
| Timothy Hazelo 7/29/05 . chapter 1
Hey, as the last reviewer said, the chopyness is actually really good in this poem!
| MadBlackWoman 7/28/05 . chapter 1
i actually think the choppiness works well for this poem and what it stands for. I like it, good work.
| Luthiena o Lorien 7/28/05 . chapter 1
Wow, I liked this one. Yeah, I wrote a Hate poem too...