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Lovedward48 2008-03-24 ch 1, anon.	abuseLol I didn't see that one coming and that's rare! Good plot! I like it!^^ I don't like Cae too much but I can deal and Erik is awesome! Boys who cry are way hotter/cuter/sexies/etc than those how don't! But I also love guys with eyeliner, black nails, dyed hair and black tight clothes! Muahahahaha! XD You did a good job again and I loved the way you wrote Caes thoughts. Keep up the good work!^^
j.d. egan 2007-10-08 ch 1,	abuseLike Cae, I'm also speechless. So, I'd just day this story is cute and wonderful.
Amerez 2007-05-19 ch 1,	abuseyay, me again. And again nice story, although I wished it were longer, but that's just me being greedy and all. he he. anyways, I'm off to check out another one of your stories...
Oh-the-Insanity 2007-05-06 ch 1,	abuseHi. I don't really write reviews (actually this would be my first), so I'm really trying not to sound like a psychotic fangirl (notice my lack of exclamation points). I've only read this and Issues, Envelopes, & Homophobes so far, but I really like your unusual writing styles (and the fact that you don't keep writing the same story with different characters). I didn't want to go through all of the 30-something pages of reviews for I,E,&H to see if someone else already mentioned it, but have you read Les Liaisons Dangerueses (I think I spelled that right), aka Dangerous Liaisons? It's written in a series of letters also, and I was curious if that was part of your inspiration. Anyway, the main point of this review was just to say that I love your nonconformism (I hope that is a word). Also, I do hate the rednecks and conservative homophobes, but Texas has it's charms (and a lot of things and people that I miss like crazy). That's my conclusion from two years (not counting summer and winter breaks) spent up in Michigan (aka the freaking frozen north). The review is a bit long, I suppose. Sorry. I just get chatty around 2am.
red-headed psychopaths want... 2007-05-06 ch 1,	abuseThat has got to be one of the greatest one-shots ever! ^.^
Half-BloodGrlPirate 2007-03-30 ch 1,	abusedamn i think this made me cry. out of all your stories i think this is definitely my favorite one. i, i think im in shock or stunned at how this story is affecting me. it is SO well-written and the characters' emotions were so awesomely expressed it felt like i could hear it or like i was there watching. i think this seriously shows ur talent as a writer. if cae and erik were real they would definitely have a great story to tell about how they met. FABULOUS JOB! HUGS, ♥ b.j/H/BGP p.s. biya! ;']
IndigoNightandRayneStorm 2007-02-20 ch 1,	abuseAw, really really really really good story! I love it! So cute! Amazing job
temerity 2007-02-01 ch 1,	abuseExquisite and amazing and everything, all at once. You've got the gift of giving the characters their own voices and making it sound natural as hell. I was supposed to be studying, but your story caught my eye--and once I started, I couldn't stop. I normally don't even read slash. Keep up the great work, and Always write on.
Poker Fish 2006-12-13 ch 1,	abuseI've read most of your stories on here,and I just want to say that you're an excellent writer. All of your stories seem different to me; like you are experimenting with different styles. I truly admire how greatly you make all the characters alive and the stories so interesting. I really hope that you keep writing. :)
Rock on an Ocean Shore 2006-08-10 ch 1,	abuseWow... that was so nice. Everything was just... pretty and well-composed. I liked the characters too and the personality quirks you gave them. Him being deaf and the rush hour thing. I just liked every part of it. Oh, and especially the /this-was-such-a-cute-one-shot/ parts. I've never seen it done before, so I thought the idea was pretty nice. ^~ Great job, by the way.
Derek57 2006-06-22 ch 1,	abuseThis is beautiful. I really loved the unexpected twist of him being deaf. I feel sorry for Erik. Great ideas here and well written as always. Keep it up! Derek x (must...stop putting kisses...)
Eric Lupin 2006-06-18 ch 1,	abuseWow, that was really sweet! A lot of bad language, sure, but it was still good! Glad I read this; Derek gave me the link. ~Eric
skylines 2006-06-01 ch 1,	abuseah brilliant! clicks favourite authors box Yay!
Catseye*Rose 2006-05-16 ch 1,	abuseOh, this was a cool story. I like how Cae's thoughts were thrown in. And the deafness was a nice twist. Hmm...I should probably go do homework now... Ciao! ~Cat
Firespirit44 2006-05-14 ch 1,	abuseHow coincidental was it that the boy that he saved was gay too?? Lol, nice story. xD No critical remarks from here. By the way, I don't exactly like m/m stories, but I do love your writing. And that's why I clicked on the link. ^^

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