it makes me believe it,short and all of these.

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gives me faith,which is a seriously big accheivement (you have to know me)

haunting

very pious...sounds like a kind of hymn.(compliment lol)

tuche' my friend, but if you realy need to dis up something about grammer and punctuation look at my story, i gurentee there will be spelling mistakes as well. btw this one is also just more words slapped together. i get it that u like god but u could have made it longer.

it helps to have different words the word "songs" is repeated throughout the whole poem...btw, after reading selected parts of your lengthy profile, i'd like to ask, how is it, that you like linkin park but hate rap?

If one believes it... Or has the will to believe

Good!

Soli Deo Gloria

Quite nice.

This is very sweet, I like it. Are you going to add anymore to it?

Amen! Jesus has blessed you with a beautiful talent and it shows, never stop writing for Him. God Bless ya and Keep'em coming.

Needa S.

Beautiful write. Keep'em coming. God Bless.

Needa S.

Very powerful.

Very nice.