Wow...That was extremly AWSOME! I love the words you use and everything about this!

Wow! That's an amazing poem. I really enjoyed reading it.

It is sad that people are too busy to help a fellow human in need. This poem really reminds me of how we ought to care for each other, as Jesus would do.

Great job! :)

Wonderful poetry...before you had a fictionpress account I tried to write a fiction story that was a modern-day samartian story. Hmm...that didn't work out too well...I took it down. Yeah. Good reminder that this type of thing still happens today.

Anyway...I agree with you about dating because you are interested in marrying...but, like if it was me, I would still date and marry an unbeliever if he was a great guy. Like marrying a non-religious guy would be okay for me. But that would also mean he would have to be comfortable with me occasonally talking about God (while I would respect him for his beliefs or lack of.) Yeah. But it's cool. I see where ya coming from.

Audrey reminds me of my older sister too who is also going to be a freshman in college! :) Well...look forward to reading more. God Bless, silent.