this poem makes me hate you, but i mean that as a compliment. only thing is the "small lonely boy at the edge of the shore" seems kinda long and awkward to me, but that could just be me. but really, great poem.

oh this was sweet. i liked it. i especially liked the flip of the young boy. very innocent. i like innocent feeling poems

~mack

This is really beautiful. It really has it's own rhythm, and I can imagine it being sung.

Sweet and absolutely bursting with seaside imagery. Great job!

I love this.Dreamy and sweet and poetic.My favorite bit is the end of the first stanza thing.This should be in a children's book with really gorgeous paintings that go with the verse. ^^

I love this poem. It flows perfectly I can't believe no one reviewed it yet. Only suggestion I can give is for line 20 infinite doesn't fit to me. Great job though, I'm trying to decide whether it should go in my favorites.