Oh wow.
Really really nice.

I like how you never really said anything outright, but in your vague implications, we understand what happened anyway.

I think it's a little weird how they don't feel guilt, since we later learn that they "belong to other people". It just suddenly popped in there and gave the story a whole different twist.

But yay good job. (:

wow, that was sad=(

Very nice. I really life it

I really liked it.

Simply stunning. Fantastic work.

Oh, very interesting use of repetition. Congrats on a well written short piece.

great story... beautifully written... very sad, but realistic, which is good... u did a great job showing the characters' emotions... keep up the good work... btw, if u hav time and want to, i'd love reveiws on sum of my stuff, especially 'once in a blue moon'...